So far over the year my writing has a value of a five or six out of nine. This scores are good, but with room for improvement. What I should continue is my thesis which are usually good. Another is the amount of quotes I use, three or more in a paragraph, something I plan to continue. However, I have lost points on multiply essays because I loose focus or stray from the topic I was writing about, so that is one skill I should focus on. Another is the transitions to the next body paragraph, also needing work.